Problems With The Second 'Rendering' System Network

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 42-3):

Adding these choices into our system network gives us Figure 2.2. In this figure the joint square bracket and brace means and/or. That is, one may choose to render or tender or both. Thus this network says that in tenor, one may tender a position or render a position or both at the same time. If rendering, this may address or note the position (with the various subtypes described for Figure 2.1 above), and any of these renderings may be done externally or internally.

Reviewer Comments:

[1] To be clear, this network misrepresents a system of potential language options as a system of tenor, the interpersonal context that is realised by such language choices.

[2] To be clear, this network has no entry condition or realisation statements.