Summary: Chapter 5 – Tuning

Chapter 5 presents Tuning as a new system for adjusting interpersonal meaning, structured around three clinal dimensions: Scope (breadth of address), Stakes (degree of risk), and Spirit (affective tone). The chapter positions Tuning as a discrete system that complements Positioning and Orienting, offering additional ways to calibrate how meanings are “tendered” in discourse. However, a close reading reveals several critical issues in its conceptualisation and analytic necessity.

1. Redundancy with existing SFL resources

Each of Tuning’s dimensions overlaps heavily with established systemic-functional categories:

• Scope parallels Engagement and Graduation, as well as reference and membership categorisation devices, capturing inclusivity/exclusivity and group alignment.

• Stakes is largely a repackaging of Graduation (force/focus) and Engagement (proclaim vs entertain), with its “risk” defined relationally by background values rather than independently observable linguistic features.

• Spirit mirrors Attitude (Affect, Judgement, Appreciation) and interacts with Graduation and Engagement to produce “tone,” yet is presented as a separate dimension labelled with a metaphorical “vibe.”

Across all three dimensions, Tuning risks terminological inflation — taking familiar linguistic and discourse-semantic resources, giving them new labels, and promoting them as a distinct system.

2. Slippage between linguistic description and social interpretation

Tuning repeatedly blurs the boundary between:

• Observable linguistic patterns (pronouns, vocatives, quantifiers, hashtags, emojis, commands), and

• Inferred social consequences (disruption of community values, high-stakes positions, warmth or hostility in social bonds).

For instance, the notion of “stakes” relies on an analyst’s projection of social significance within a community, rather than on measurable linguistic features. Similarly, “spirit” uses impressionistic affective labels (warm/warn) that risk turning description into subjective commentary. These slippages undermine the claim that Tuning is a discrete linguistic system.

3. Circularity and dataset constraints

The chapter sometimes embeds Tuning in the corpus design itself (e.g., #momguilt posts), producing circular validation: scope appears everywhere because the dataset was selected to foreground a particular community, which then reinforces the impression that scope is a systematic resource.

4. Meta-system framing

Ultimately, Tuning functions more as a meta-functional overlay, a way of describing how existing resources (Appraisal, Engagement, Graduation, reference devices) can be “adjusted” across a continuum, rather than as a system with independent analytic status. Its conceptual appeal lies in metaphorical clarity (scope, stakes, spirit), but the theoretical necessity is weak.

Conclusion

While Tuning offers an engaging and accessible metaphor for how interpersonal meaning can be adjusted, it largely repackages established SFL categories, blurs analytic strata, and imports social interpretation into linguistic description. Its main contribution may be pedagogical — helping readers think about alignment, risk, and tone — rather than extending the theoretical apparatus of SFL. Readers should approach Tuning with an appreciation of its rhetorical and descriptive value, but with caution regarding its analytic independence.

Tuning Conclusion

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 149):

This chapter has introduced the role of tuning in the orchestration of interpersonal meaning. We have explored some of the key meanings made in a corpus of #momguilt tweets within which mothers vent their frustrations over contravening community expectations about the behaviour and temperament of 'good moms'. As we have seen, whether the vibe is convivial or conflictual, the meanings tendered in social media posts may be adjusted via the TUNING system by modifying their relation to other meanings already tendered in a previous post or with broader background values positioned by a particular community. This might involve adjusting the amount of risk or controversy they engender (STAKES), the breadth of the voices they include or assume (SCOPE), or their level of approachability or reproach they enact (SPIRIT). These distinctions in meaning are encapsulated as the TUNING system (Figure 5.1).

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In their conclusion, the authors present the TUNING system as orchestrating interpersonal meaning through stakes, scope, and spirit. They emphasise that social media posts can be “adjusted via the TUNING system by modifying their relation to other meanings already tendered…or with broader background values positioned by a particular community.” On the surface, this captures the relational dynamism of online interaction.

The problem lies in how the empirical coordination of resources is treated as if it constitutes the contextual systems of tenor. Throughout the chapter, we see emoji, appraisal, punctuation, vocatives, and hashtags appearing in complex combinations. These are co-deployed resources, empirically observable, and they do interact with stakes, scope, and spirit. But the authors present them as if each combination instantiates the tenor system itself — that is, as if context is being directly “written into” the posts rather than being construed through them.

This conflation collapses a critical stratification distinction. Tenor is a system of context, representing social roles, relations, and participant alignments. It exists independently of any particular token of language, emoji, or other semiotic resource. Treating empirical co-occurrences as direct instantiations of tenor blurs the line between what users do in interaction and the contextual plane of social relations.

In short, the chapter’s conclusion risks flattening the semiotic hierarchy: language, paralinguistic signs, and contextual strata are treated as equivalent, rather than recognising the nested, interacting nature of strata. The empirical evidence of co-deployment is fascinating and illuminates how tuning operates in practice — but it does not absolve the need for theoretical precision about what resides in context versus what resides in language or multimodal semiotic resources.

Scoping the Collective: Stratal Misalignment in the Treatment of Scoping

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 137-8):

As mentioned in Section 5.4, membership categorisation tends to be a scoping resource since in order to point out to whom a meaning is relevant, a person or group needs to be identified or at least implicated through some meaning that activates relevant associations. Less explicit collectivising can also occur through resources that invoked putative others. For instance, we or us were quite frequent in the corpus and this choice can be seen to invoke an implicit them.

(25) #Momguilt is real, but we deserve a break too. Be sure to take it #momlife [URL to blog post titled ‘resetting’]

The collectivisation device ‘we’ in the above, in conjunction with ‘too’ implies that there is another group of non-mothers who are getting the break that these mothers deserve. Collectivisation was also used in construing the shared complaint that mothers and not others are undertaking too much emotional labour and so is involved in the policing of scoping.

(26) Lets talk #selfcare and #momguilt for a minute. It is all too often we lose sight of ourselves as Moms. We take on the role of boo-boo kisser, butt wiper, laundry queen, maker of meals you…[link to an Instagram post]

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The authors once again blur the boundary between language and context, treating membership categorisation (a semantic resource) as if it were a contextual operation (“a scoping resource”). In doing so, they mislocate the level at which collectivisation is modelled.

In SFL terms, “we” and “us” are grammatical resources realising interpersonal meaning at the semantic stratum. The collectivisation they effect is a semantic construal of social relation, not a contextual operation of “scope.” To treat such linguistic instantiations as contextual “resources” is to collapse the distinction between language and culture (context) — precisely the slippage that Halliday’s stratified model was designed to prevent.

Further, the claim that “membership categorisation tends to be a scoping resource” treats reference to social identity as if it directly adjusted contextual scope rather than construing participants within a meaning potential. This erases the crucial semiotic mediation through which such categories enter into context in the first place.

The authors’ use of the term “policing of scoping” adds another layer of confusion. “Policing” is metaphorically social, but “scoping” is analytically contextual in their model — yet here, both are used to describe textual patterns of interpersonal meaning. This reveals an unacknowledged drift toward analysing language as if it were contextual behaviour, which again conflates strata. The linguistic phenomena (pronouns, evaluative lexis, implicature) are semantic; the “scope” they are said to “police” is not part of the language system at all, but a construct of the authors’ contextual metalanguage.

Finally, the authors’ interpretation that “we” implies an implicit “them” is not wrong at the semantic level — but to treat that implication as a contextual operation rather than a semantic alignment introduces conceptual noise. The inclusive/exclusive contrast operates within language; it does not constitute scoping at the contextual level. 

Collapsing Scope: From Semiotic Resource to Social Group

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 137):

As mentioned earlier, the most frequent hashtags co-occurring with #momguilt provide an overview of the kinds of groups that are explicitly convoked or sourced in the corpus, for instance 'working moms' in posts such as (23).

(23) Can we talk about #momguilt? Especially that particular bind #workingmoms put themselves in: guilty for not being with their kids AND guilty for not devoting enough energy to work...

In this post the hashtag #workingmoms enacts scoping as it collectivises this group as the target of negative judgement, reinforcing the 'particular bind' for which this post casts them as responsible. Background meanings about the so-called 'mommy wars' (Abetz & Moore, 2018) which set 'stay-at-home mothers' (SAHM) against 'working mothers' are relevant to this scoping. An example of a hashtag used to convoke this opposing group is #SAHM in (24).

(24) I'm only REALLY happy when my husband is home. The second he leaves I feel like I will never be happy again. I hate this. #MomGuilt #SAHM

We can imagine that a high-stakes reply to this post would be to suggest that the mother find employment, because of the way that it leverages previously scoped and arranged bonds from the shared cultural context.

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The central problem in this excerpt is that Doran, Martin & Zappavigna once again blur the boundary between language and context. They treat hashtags like #workingmoms and #SAHM as though they enact contextual processes—“scoping,” “convoking groups,” or “reinforcing binds”—rather than as linguistic tokens whose semantic selections realise contextual relations. This collapses the Hallidayan distinction between semantics (as the construal of context) and context (as the semiotic potential realised through semantics).

By attributing contextual agency directly to the hashtags—claiming that #workingmoms “enacts scoping” or “collectivises a group”—the authors treat linguistic form as though it directly manipulates the social order. In the canonical model, however, this is a realisation relation: the hashtag realises a semantic construal of alignment, identification, or judgement within a field of discourse. It does not perform the contextual process itself.

The conceptual slippage is further revealed in their statement that “background meanings about the so-called ‘mommy wars’ … are relevant to this scoping.” Here, the ‘background meanings’ (that is, contextual semiotic potential) are treated as already arranged resources that language merely “leverages.” This reverses the dependency: it is through language that these contextual potentials are activated, instantiated, and made meaningfully relevant. Without that construal, there is no “background meaning” to leverage.

Finally, the speculative gesture—“we can imagine that a high-stakes reply to this post would be…”—reveals an even deeper confusion: they are analysing not actual social meaning but their own hypothetical construals as though these were features of the corpus. This imports the analyst’s imagination into the data without reflexive acknowledgement, reinforcing the illusion that “shared cultural context” exists independently of its linguistic construal.

In short, the authors mislocate meaning-making: instead of analysing how language realises contextual meaning, they describe language as doing contextual work directly, thereby erasing the stratification on which systemic functional linguistics depends.

Blurring the Boundary Between Context and Text Once More

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 137):

Since the corpus consisted of posts about experiences of guilt, the people and groups experiencing guilt or judging others as guilty are pertinent to tuning. The choice of the source tends to operate in the service of scoping in the corpus. For example, as we have seen mothers reject themselves through negative self-judgement throughout the corpus (e.g. 'moms' in (21)), with the most common source of such negative self-judgement being the author themselves (e.g. 'I' in (22).

(21) Do any other #moms feel guilty about just vegging and watching tv while their kid naps? #momguilt #momlife #motherhood #shouldibedoingsomethingproductive

(22) I feel like the worst parent in the world listening to my kid sniff with snot in their nose. #momguilt #momlife #sickbaby

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This paragraph once again exposes a recurrent conceptual confusion in the authors’ model — namely, the conflation of contextual variables with linguistic realisations. Scoping and tuning are presented as contextual (tenor-level) systems, yet the examples offered are entirely linguistic: pronouns (“I,” “moms”), appraisal lexis (“worst parent”), and hashtags. These are all resources of the discourse semantic system of APPRAISAL, not contextual categories.

By treating linguistic patterns as contextual systems, the authors collapse the crucial Hallidayan distinction between context (the culture as semiotic system) and language (the realisation of that potential). The passage thus fails to maintain the semiotic stratification that underpins systemic functional theory: field, tenor, and mode should be realised by semantics, not constituted by it.

The result is a descriptive circularity — “scope” appears both as context and as language realisation, with no theoretical cut between the two. What should have been a reflection on how context is construed through linguistic resources becomes instead a blurred fusion of strata.

Scaling Belonging: The Semiotic Gradient of Scope

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 136):

Tuning may be adjusted by expanding or restricting the range of individual personae or groups to whom a particular meaning is applicable. In the case of our corpus, we have to a certain extent built scoping into our selection criteria for constructing the corpus since the #momguilt hashtag broadly concerns mothers. Scoping can involve both expansion and contraction in terms of the group or personae relevant to the meaning in play. For instance, embracing a whole community through choices in pronominal grammar is a choice to enlarge scope.

(17) We all have it. And it's never easy #momguilt [link to an article about 'mom guilt'] #parenting #momlife #guilt

(18) Moms, if this isn’t all of us on some level I don’t know what is. We try to do it all because the #momguilt tells us we have to ...but God didn’t make us to live like that. It takes a village! Walk alongside each other and lift each other up!

At the same time various resources for identifying participants can reduce the scope to the level of individuals.

(19) Telling my four babies goodbye yesterday. Enjoying some me time, but I miss them when I’m away. #momguilt

Scope can also be narrowed down to particular kinds of groups. For instance, in (20) the clients who experience guilt are subspecified as mothers in particular.

(20) #Guilt is such a common emotion from my anxiety clients, particularly moms. #momguilt

While the distinction between whole communities and individuals is the most obvious case, social relations are very complex. Within communities there will be different arrays of subgroups, and groups which span multiple communities. There are different ways of 'dog whistling' with reference to these groups without naming them or addressing them directly.

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While the authors frame SCOPE as a tenor-level system—a feature of context governing the range of personae and communities relevant to a meaning—the examples they provide consistently conflate context with linguistic instantiation. Pronouns, vocatives, and hashtags are treated as if they themselves are scope, rather than as realisations of an underlying contextual potential. This risks collapsing the analytic distinction between what constrains interpersonal meaning (tenor/context) and what realises it in discourse (language/semantics).

Furthermore, discussions of subgrouping, cross-community references, and subtle “dog-whistling” imply a linguistic enactment of social reach, yet are presented as if they define the system itself. In SFL terms, tenor sets the potential scope, but the authors’ examples demonstrate textual realisation, not the systemic contextual resource. Without a clear separation, the TUNING system risks being misread as a description of discourse rather than a description of social context.

Vocatives, Hashtags, and the Problem of Conflated Scope

 Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 135):

Mustering a community around a bond requires some way of gathering that community into the negotiation, for example via vocatives which include phenomena such as calls, addresses and exclamations (Zwicky, 1974 in Poynton (1984)). Vocation is an optional system within clause grammar that is important in how power, solidarity, status, role-relationships and in/formality are interpersonally construed (Poynton, 1984). SCOPING is thus realised in this text through resources such as vocatives which convoke and source an ambient community of mothers – such as the Vocative Moms at the beginning of the tweet. The use of the plural pronoun 'we' also collectivises these mothers as the relevant identity, together with the hashtags, #momguilt, #momlife, and #Moms. Collectivisation thus runs as a prosody through the tweet, realised opportunistically throughout. Through the hashtag positively judging god (#godcan), together with other meanings about god in the embedded image, suggesting that the particular community is not all 'moms' but specifically Christian ones, this tweet convokes a very particular community.

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This passage sets out to explain how communities are “mustered” in discourse, focusing on vocatives, pronouns, and hashtags as resources of collectivisation. Yet the treatment raises several issues.

First, vocatives are described as “an optional system within clause grammar” (after Poynton, 1984), but this grammatical framing sits uneasily with the much broader claim that vocatives “convoke and source an ambient community.” The theoretical leap—from the structural position of a clause element to the socio-semiotic act of rallying a community—is asserted rather than explained. What is missing is an account of how such a local grammatical resource scales into the ambient collective invoked.

Second, the conflation of scope with solidarity categories is problematic. While the use of we or hashtags such as #momlife can indeed collectivise, this collectivisation is not a neutral scoping operation but an ideological act of bounding identity. The analysis collapses this complexity into a generic cline from “individualising” to “collectivising,” thereby erasing the political and cultural work performed by such categories. For instance, “moms” functions not only to collectivise but also to normalise a particular cultural and gendered role, which is left unexamined.

Third, the treatment of hashtags like #godcan extends the collectivisation argument into matters of belief and value. The authors note that the tweet convokes “not all ‘moms’ but specifically Christian ones,” but they fail to unpack the consequences. Religious invocation is not merely narrowing scope; it is layering symbolic alignment onto social identity. By treating it as simply another scoping operation, the analysis reduces meaning to a technical adjustment rather than recognising the intersection of ideology, value, and belief.

Finally, the claim that collectivisation “runs as a prosody through the tweet” gestures to systemic-functional semantics but without the systematic demonstration that such a claim would require. Instead of carefully mapping how collectivisation permeates the text, the authors rely on a series of examples loosely tied together under the heading of scope.

In short, the account overextends the concept of scope by stretching it across grammar, identity, ideology, and belief without clarifying how these levels cohere. The risk is that the analytic apparatus begins to explain too much, leaving the specificity of each semiotic resource under-theorised.

Collapsing Scope into Identity: The Limits of Individualising vs. Collectivising

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 134):

Tuning is the region of interpersonal meaning concerned with how a position is pitched as more or less loaded, as more or less friendly, and as more or less relevant to particular personae or communities. In this section we will consider resources for modifying the TENDERED and RENDERED meanings being put forward in a text in terms of:

• SCOPE: [individualised] « [collectivised]
• STAKES : [higher] « [lower]
• SPIRIT: [warming] « [warning]

We begin with SCOPE, which is concerned with the extent of a position's ambit. A key dimension is how broad or narrow the group is that is being sourced or convoked. SCOPE is a clined system ranging from narrower [individualise] to broader [collectivise] options. This kind of distinction can be realised linguistically through number (e.g., we all vs I) and more broadly through quantification of people within the discourse semantic system of GRADUATION (Martin & White, 2005), as well as through various membership categorisation devices (Schegloff, 2007) which function to flag group association. Paralinguistically, it can be realised through shifts in loudness from a whisper (individualising) to a yell (collectivising), body orientation and eye gaze to an individual or a collective, the breadth or narrowness of deictic pointing – using, say, the pinky finger to point (individualising) or the whole hand (collectivising); (Kress & Van Leeuwen, 2021; Ngo et al., 2022; Van Leeuwen, 1999). 

In work on identity and iconisation, (Tann, 2010a; Tann, 2010b; Tann, 2013) draws on membership categorisation devices to specify three kinds of association that construe belonging relevant to SCOPING:

• Categorisation – classifying by type; e.g., Western, Muslim, middle-class etc.
• Collectivisation – generating oppositions between groups; e.g., us v them, stay-at-home mothers v working mothers, conservatives v liberals, Australians v refugees etc.
• Spatialisation – classifying via place; e.g., Aussies, Kiwis, Yankees etc.

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This passage introduces tuning as a “region” of interpersonal meaning and narrows immediately to the question of scope. On the surface, scope is defined as a cline running from individualised to collectivised meanings, and a series of linguistic and paralinguistic examples are offered to illustrate this span. But closer inspection reveals several difficulties.

First, the very definition of “region” is left unclear. The term functions as a spatial metaphor rather than a precise theoretical category, raising questions about how tuning relates to established strata, systems, or networks within the model. Scope itself is then described as a “clined system,” but the range of phenomena brought under this cline—number, deixis, membership categorisation, volume, gesture—do not necessarily belong to the same semiotic order. The result is a catalogue of heterogeneous examples forced into a single continuum.

Second, the paralinguistic illustrations stretch the concept. Whispering versus yelling or pointing with a pinky versus the whole hand may display inclusion or exclusion, but whether such embodied practices operate as part of the same “system” as linguistic collectivisation is far from obvious. Without a stronger account of how these resources integrate with language proper, the taxonomy risks over-extension.

Third, the treatment of membership categorisation raises a deeper issue. Labelling groups as “Western,” “Muslim,” “conservative,” or “refugee” is not simply a matter of scoping ambit; it is also a matter of invoking ideologically loaded categories. In treating these equally as scoping devices, the framework risks flattening ideological evaluation into neutralised semiotic description, when in fact these categories operate at the intersection of meaning and value.

Finally, the eclectic theoretical sourcing—Schegloff, Kress, Van Leeuwen, Tann—points to a further problem: the framework here is less a principled integration than a patchwork. Different traditions are loosely stitched together under the rubric of scope without an account of how they belong to one coherent system of interpersonal meaning.

In short, while the intention is to define scope as a systematic dimension of tuning, what emerges instead is a loose assemblage of examples and analogies. Rather than clarifying the concept, the attempt to codify scope risks obscuring the very semiotic distinctions it seeks to capture.

Clarifying Scope: Individualising, Collectivising, and the Limits of Tuning

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 130):

In addition to the various ways that the positions in this exchange are put at risk and the extent to which they are cast in more or less threatening terms, we also need to consider the personae and communities for whom they are positioned as relevant. Even though shared background values about motherhood are leveraged at points in this interaction (as we have seen in the previous two chapters), the mother-child dyad remains the primary locus for establishing the relevance of the meanings construed. In other words, in terms of what we refer to as SCOPE, the negotiation is mainly individualising rather than collectivising. As we saw when considering vocatives, the proposals in the exchange are directly targeted at the interlocutor – making their ambit very clear and giving the children little wiggle room in which to get out of doing what the mother wants them to do. Also relevant to how scope is regulated is the way in which the source of feelings is directly ascribed to the children by the mother, rather than making general statements about pushing legs or going out (e.g., 'she doesn't want her leg pushed'; 'you'll have a lovely day'). There are some instances of collectivising, for instance the 'we' in 'we'll get Kristy dressed; but these are bounded by the limited scope of the mother-child dyad. As this example shows, the scope, stakes and spirit are constantly being nuanced, all at the same time, and often through the same language resources (such as Vocatives – Mummy, pet, Ruth etc.) as Kristy, her mother and Ruth all try to get what they want.

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What stands out in this passage is how the authors move rather fluidly between three distinct dimensions — (i) the social scope of interlocutors (dyad vs. community), (ii) the discursive targeting of vocatives and pronominal choices, and (iii) the experiential construal of affective sources. These are not the same kind of thing, yet they are grouped together under the single heading scope.

The effect is that “scope” becomes a grab-bag for any linguistic move that seems to delimit or extend relevance, whether in terms of participants, meanings, or values. This is convenient, but conceptually imprecise. It blurs the difference between scope as social distribution (how broadly a meaning is ratified across a community) and scope as interpersonal reference (how narrowly a meaning is addressed in the moment).

The invocation of collectivising vs. individualising is also problematic. On the one hand, the authors claim that the dyad is the “primary locus,” yet they acknowledge shared background values around motherhood as shaping the negotiation. But this is precisely the point: scope cannot be treated as a binary between dyadic vs. collective. Meanings always operate across multiple intersecting planes of scope — immediate interlocutors, proximate kinship group, wider community norms. To collapse these into a single sliding scale misses the layered way in which interpersonal meaning distributes.

Finally, the claim that “scope, stakes and spirit are constantly being nuanced … often through the same language resources” points to another difficulty. If every feature of language potentially adjusts all three dimensions at once, then the proposed distinctions risk dissolving into redundancy. Without a principled basis for separating them, we are left with overlapping redescriptions of interpersonal dynamics, rather than an organised system.

In short, the analytic apparatus here risks conflating the distribution of meanings across social formations with the addressivity of utterances within interaction, while also failing to maintain clear criteria for what counts as a scope-adjusting resource.

Hands-On Tuning: When Stakes, Spirit, and Scope Meet Motherhood

Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 128-30):

Returning to the exchange that we have considered throughout the book, as Kristy's mother is attempting to get her dressed, we have seen that an interpersonal juggling act characterises the interaction. In this chapter we will add the dimension of tuning to our consideration of the interpersonal dynamics of this exchange. In this negotiation the mother moves Kristy toward compliance with her request, at the same time as getting Ruth to stop pushing her sister – avoiding as she does so potential interpersonal meltdowns that might delay her end goal of getting out the door on time. The skill with which she manages this interaction is apparent in the ways she adjusts the levels of risk in her proposals, as she guides her less than optimally compliant children towards departure. Throughout she adjusts the vibe of the negotiation, all the while attending to the needs of the individuals present in the exchange. Not only is it important for everyone to feel like they are heard; but in addition it is important that everyone knows that the instructions, even though often cast indirectly, are to be interpreted as directed to the two children present in the exchange.

If we look at the language in this unfolding phase, we can see its interpersonal dynamics play out as distinct choices in TUNING. Rather than directly commanding Kristy to get dressed, an option likely to put her at loggerheads with her small and obstinate interlocutor, the mother leverages the persuasive power of interpersonal metaphor by adopting an interrogative clause structure. In addition to shifting purview, the indirectness of 'how about' softens the impact of the proposal by casting it as tentative. In terms of TUNING, it lowers the stakes – most likely with the hope of avoiding the explosion of emotion that does unfortunately eventuate. Kristy's blunt refusal (‘no’) raises the stakes of her rejection of the mother's proposal, though as Kristy tries to manoeuvre her way out of going, she strategically lowers the stakes of her rejection. This is realised through the indirectness of interpersonal metaphor ('don't want to go' for 'don't make me go'). Nonetheless, her crying largely overrides this by significantly raising the stakes of her refusal. …

At the same time, the mother’s repetition of reasons for Kristy to get dressed, combined with her use of modality (probably, maybe) and lowering force (a little bit) can be interpreted via graduation (Martin & White, 2005) as lowering the stakes of Kristy leaving. …

Kristy’s mother also lowers the stakes of her initial suggestion for why Kristy doesn’t want to go out through modality metaphor, using I think and I don’t think to indicate the tentativeness of her suggestions …

Kristy and her mother’s use of grammatical metaphor earlier in the conversation contrasts with the more direct kinds of rejecting used later on such as 'don't!' by Kristy to Ruth and ‘don’t get cranky’ by Kristy’s mother in response where stakes are raised through their frankness. In this case, Kristy tries to assert her status over her younger sister by combining both asserting purview and high stakes (also suggested by the exclamation mark, suggesting a loud, sharp voice quality); but her mother trumps her by using the same strategy to protect Ruth. …

At the same time that Kristy and her mother are adjusting stakes, differing levels of ‘friendliness’ are also involved. In terms of tuning, we refer to this as SPIRIT – a scale whereby propositions and proposals are cast as more convivial [warming] or more threatening [warning]. For example, the mother employs vocatives of endearment such as pet and sweetie to warm her proposals (Poynton, 1984, 1990a). Similarly, Kristy’s use of a warming vocative Mummy in 'Mummy... I don't want to go away from you' can be interpreted as the child capitalising on the opportunity afforded by the momentary lowering of stakes that occurs when the mother reflects on the challenging time they are having together ('oh dear oh dear'). We do not know from the transcript what exactly was happening at this time; but one might imagine that while they are talking Kristy’s mother may have given her a hug and both may speak in a higher pitch and smoother voice quality to emphasise this warmth (Ngo et al., 2022; Van Leeuwen, 1999). This moment in the exchange is interrupted by Kristy’s sister Ruth pushing her leg, possibly out of jealousy at all the attention being given to Kristy in this delicate negotiation. The mother’s choice to address the child as 'Ruth' when she attempts to stop this act of minor violence is sterner than her other vocation choices in this exchange. It is a warning, even though it is tempered via the interpersonal metaphor that tends to pervade the mother’s talk ('she doesn't want her leg pushed, Ruth' for 'Don't push her leg, Ruth'). Nonetheless, despite these nuances, Kristy’s crying establishes a prosody of negative spirit combined with raised stakes that colours the entire conversation.

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Tuning in Practice – Kristy’s Dressing Exchange

1. Tuning as analytic overlay

• The examples are detailed and engaging, showing scope, stakes, and spirit in action.

• However, the analyses largely translate intuitively observable phenomena into Tuning terminology, rather than demonstrating that Tuning captures something independently unmodellable by SFL.

• For instance, softening a proposal with “how about” or “I think” is already describable via modality and Graduation, and marking friendliness through vocatives or prosody is captured by Attitude + Graduation + Engagement. Tuning acts more as a layer of interpretive commentary than as a distinct system.

2. Social interpretation vs linguistic description

• The critique points to the familiar Chapter 5 pattern: linguistic choices are interpreted through the lens of interpersonal effect, e.g., Kristy’s crying or Ruth’s push.

• While intuitively appealing, this approach blurs the analytic boundary between observable language and inferred social impact. For example, raising stakes through exclamation marks or prosody depends heavily on context and affective interpretation, not strictly on systemic-functional categories.

3. Redundancy and circularity

• Almost every example of “lowering stakes” or “warming spirit” overlaps with existing SFL tools: modality, Graduation, vocatives, exclamatives, prosody.

• There’s little in these examples that cannot be analysed using canonical Appraisal + Graduation + Engagement. Tuning does not uncover new semiotic mechanisms; it relabels and frames them for interpretive storytelling.

4. Pedagogical appeal vs analytic necessity

• The examples do succeed in making the concept of Tuning accessible and vivid — readers can see scope, stakes, and spirit “moving” in a live interaction.

• But the chapter risks conflating descriptive clarity with theoretical innovation. The system of Tuning is helpful for teaching or illustrative purposes, but it does not add a new analytic stratum beyond what SFL already provides.

Verdict

The dialogue illustrations convincingly demonstrate the intuitive appeal of Tuning, showing how stakes and spirit fluctuate in real interactions. Yet they also reveal the core weakness of Chapter 5: Tuning functions as a repackaging of existing linguistic resources, with analysis dependent on social interpretation. Its value lies in pedagogical exposition, not in extending the analytic power of SFL. 

Tuning or Rebranding? When Scope, Stakes, and Spirit Claim a System

 Doran, Martin & Zappavigna (2025: 128):

Following on from our exploration of POSITIONING and ORIENTING, this chapter explores another significant dimension in relation to how interpersonal meanings are negotiated – which we will refer to as TUNING. Tuning offers additional ways to adjust meanings that are being put forward – to raise or lower the stakes of what is being said, to broaden or narrow the scope of who it relates to and to shift the spirit in which the meanings are being put forward. In this chapter we will introduce three main resources within the TUNING system:

- scope - whereby the ambit of a position is either broadened or narrowed in terms of the personae and communities it may concern (How inclusive or encompassing is the meaning?).

- stakes - whereby positions are calibrated in terms of interpersonal risk (How concerning or significant is the meaning? How tenuous is its standing?)

- spirit - whereby a position is adjusted to be read more or less favourably (What's the vibe of the meaning? What's its tone?).

ChatGPT Comments:

The chapter opens by positioning Tuning as a new dimension following Positioning and Orienting, promising additional ways to adjust interpersonal meanings. At first glance, the framing gives the impression of a theoretically necessary system, but a closer reading raises a number of concerns.

1. Repackaging, not innovation

The three dimensions of Tuning — Scope, Stakes, Spirit — largely repackage already-described SFL resources:

• Scope reflects the breadth of engagement, pronominal reference, and quantification.

• Stakes maps onto Graduation (force/focus) and Engagement (contestability).

• Spirit aligns with Attitude, Graduation, and Engagement, capturing positive or negative affective tone.

By branding these adjustments as a “system,” the authors create the illusion of novelty, when in fact these phenomena are already accommodated within existing appraisal and discourse-semantic frameworks.

2. Metaphor over stratal clarity

The labels themselves are evocative — scope as inclusivity, stakes as risk, spirit as vibe — but they foreground effect rather than linguistic instantiation. This emphasis risks obscuring the distinction between what is linguistically expressed and how it is socially interpreted.

3. Orthogonality and meta-system framing

Tuning is framed as orthogonal to Positioning and Orienting, yet all three concern the negotiation of interpersonal meaning. Tuning may be better understood as a meta-layer: a way of describing modulation across familiar resources rather than a discrete system in its own right.

Verdict

The introduction sets up Tuning as a systematic innovation, but careful reading reveals it to be a conceptual and pedagogical framing of existing SFL mechanisms, with metaphorical labels that appeal rhetorically but risk inflating the theoretical claims.